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Heaven upside down
How cool bliss flakes
shiver into rotting coal
reflective foil

wrapped, intertwined in a coil,
without form,
withered a storm and flicker,
faith imploded

devalued, jaded

land and become tar and feathered
how bold
to know that every story
shines, flows, and rusts

to trust this injustice
is to appreciate the lair
the only direction to which anything
can at all--> fall
abstract and absolutely negative

an impressionist painting in words of a black hole when it is home.
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vespera Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"an impressionist painting in words of a black hole when it is home" so cool
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adagiobreezes Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
I like the way the poetry builds up an image and then destroys it over and over.
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